Research and Planning - Drafts of Advert

Drafts of Advertisement

Before creating our final product, Josh and I had to go through various drafting to ensure we were creating a conventional product. Each time we developed a new idea or made changes, we received feedback from our teacher and peers that we knew liked the UK rap genre, as their feedback was beneficial for us in order to make improvements. 

Draft 1:

Positives:

1) Clear consistent campaign relating to digipak.

2) Colour scheme compliments the eye.

3) Relevant/ key information on poster.

Improvements:

1) Cropping around artist 1 (SWEENEY) head to eliminate all green areas.

2) Looks like a movie poster, very similar.

3) Parental advisory symbol (Digipak only).

Draft 2:

Positives:

1) Photoshop is much better around the artists

2) Layout is complimentary to the theme of the advert

Improvements:

1) Try and crop even smoother around SWEENEY'S image

2) Where you write about where it is available to download from, change typography 

3) The symbols of availability should be the same size

Conclusion: 

This process has been crucial in order for us to ensure that we create a product that is complimentary to all our other products. Further, the feedback has been invaluable to allow us to make the appropriate changes needed to reflect our genre. As this is a product that will be on public display, we need to ensure it is eye catching and I believe that if we make the changes advised in our draft 2 'improvements', we can do this.